217、小説の書き方 アメリカ人の先生と翻訳機を戦わせてみた。英語で小説を書こう!

217、小説の書き方 アメリカ人の先生と翻訳機を戦わせてみた。英語で小説を書こう!

私の英語の小説『半ケツ』https://www.inkitt.com/yukisembommatsu

今日、使ったテキスト。

ケビンは大学のカフェテリアでカツカレーを食べていた。でも、それはだんだん冷めていって、それは真剣にVillage Peopleのビデオを観ているからだった。ネイティブアメリカンの恰好をして、羽の帽子を被って腰の周りにちょろっとなにかを着ているシンガーが背中を向けてカメラがそれをとらえて、彼の‘半ケツ’が見えるその瞬間に、ケビンはそれをズームインした。

Kevin was eating cutlet curry in the university cafeteria. But it was getting colder, because I was seriously watching Village People’s video. The moment the singer, dressed as a Native American, wearing a feather hat and a little bit around his waist, turns his back and the camera catches it, he sees his’half-ass’. , Kevin zoomed in on it.

Kevin was sitting in the university cafeteria having a lunch of katsu curry – a dish made with breaded and deep fried pork cutlet, Japanese style curry and rice – but it was getting cold. He was intently watching a Village People video, waiting for the moment when the singer, dressed in a caricature Native American costume with war bonnet and skimpy loincloth, turned his back to the camera exposing his “hanketsu.” He paused the video at this point and zoomed in.

ケビンは若者の変わりように驚いた。あのパンクなところは全くなくなってた。長い髪は後ろで結んで、カラコンもしてない。ケビンはなんだか顔が赤くなって、それはこんな若い男と一緒にいることはないし、まるであの夜と違って見えてショックだから。変身ぶりがショックだった。それに慣れるまで時間が掛かった。

Kevin was astonished by the youth’s change. That punk place is gone. Her long hair is tied at the back and she doesn’t even have colored contacts. Kevin’s face turned red, because he’s never been with such a young man, and he looks different from that night and is shocked. His transformation was a shock. It took me some time to get used to it.

Kevin was still amazed by the way he looked. The punk look was gone. His hair was neatly tied in the back and the colored contacts were gone. Kevin felt self-conscious and blushed as he was not used to being with someone so young and also because he couldn’t shake the feeling that this was a different guy then the one from the night before, so striking was his transformation. It took a while for that feeling to leave him.

私が参考にしているYouTube英会話
『ニック式英会話』https://www.youtube.com/c/%E3%83%8B%E3%83%83%E3%82%AF%E5%BC%8F%E8%8B%B1%E4%BC%9A%E8%A9%B1
『Atsueigo』
https://www.youtube.com/c/Atsueigo-YT

参考にしている英語サイト
https://eikaiwa.dmm.com/

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